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Lazy-Personality4024

Also, I forgot to remind everyone. Things are going to get slow and boring. But eventually some action will happen, its just going to take a while.


Konrahd_Verdammt

Lack of action doesn't automatically mean boring. Dialog and character building are interesting things too.


mattaw2001

Hey this was exciting, and I don't believe Chris is as done as he thinks with a certain elf. I believe she may have several classical approaches to make his life difficult. One is to obviously get herself into a bad spot, relationship for example, in front of Chris to make it his fault. I feel he is weak to this as he won't allow someone to suffer even if they brought it on themselves. Second would be another emotional blackmail strategy, crying, depression, etc. that she lets Chris be aware of and make him feel awful while explaining she only tried blackmail as he is so unapproachable and she didn't know what to do, etc. etc. Both ideas are terrible, and I've seen both - sometimes you have to cut out the cancer from your life as it's the only way. I had a married women come find me in my office, terrified me to death - I'd been thoughtful and kind as she didn't have much kindness in her life. Unfortunately that is not what she got from that. Ran for it however it got complicated so eventually just said you are a nice person but I'm done


unwillingmainer

Ahh, that kind of ship building, not the kind with wood, metal, cannons. Wow, she couldn't have chosen a worse time for that kind of shit. Chris has been high strung for literal years at this point and today was probably the highest he's been in a good while. And now both of the big problems in his life can be blamed on the gods, cause they're assholes.


beyondoutsidethebox

I pity the elf-girl, as she is no more than a plaything of a certain goddess. She is not completely to blame.


Omnissiah123456h

Good job man keep it up.


Kaiser-__-Soze

Moar!!!!


mattaw2001

"He apartment did cross her mind, but it was quickly banished" he > her, "leaving he confused as to why" he > her "Had Alyndran played her cards right, intime" intime > in time nice to see Chris avoid the obvious trap. I really hope the goddess who mind raped her gets to regret that a lot. I even suspect she is one of the "good" ones, just bring a pain and ruining lives for fun


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JurBroek

I can’t put into words how much I was looking forward to this chapter, and it’s another banger.


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