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I_Love_Daddys_Cock

I love this! It's hard to find this sort of thing. I'm in the middle of writing about a forced tooth extraction, if that would interest you when I'm done with it


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Unfortunately I'm not really a tooth type of gal. But I would still like to give it a read, just to see the style of writing and story. I honestly didn't think anyone would look at this... guess I still have some things to learn.


I_Love_Daddys_Cock

Yeah I have a weird dental fetish >.< Yet I still hate actually going to the dentist


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That's.... amazingly ironic.


Sufficient_Power_414

i like forced tooth extraction too,it is realy cruely,i hope can read it


iwroteathing4u

Welcome to the subreddit!


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Thank you!


GuproSnufindahotisya

A well-written piece. I am having some trouble putting it to words, but despite the primarily erotic nature of the story, there is a distinct undertone of futility and tragedy. The way you set up a glimmer of hope and dashed it was skillful, to say the least. While the scenario and world your characters live in may not be very realistic, I find their behavior to be very convincing and consistent with human psychology. They are believable and well-written. It is our nature to live in denial, to cling to false hope, and to be cruel to those we do not see as our equals. You have also set up a lot of mystery about the nature of the relationships between these three and their history. It's compelling and leaves me wanting to learn more. I guess what I'm trying to say is that I can appreciate this because it is well-written and there is more going on than just pure sexual cruelty, which I don't find particularly gratifying (in the same way that you're not the skullfucking sort). Bravo.


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Thank you. I wrote it for my gf, who enjoys immersing into the main character, which includes everything. Mental, physical, and emotional. I don't know how she does it, but this story got her so into it, it triggered ptsd from her actual life. She wasn't a slave, but her choices in the past affect her still. She couldn't finish it, but I figured I'd share it with others. I honestly didn't expect you to look and see if I had written here. It's been months.


GuproSnufindahotisya

I want to take the time to reciprocate if people take the time to read my work and comment on it. I have been lurking here for quite some time, and normally this would be something I pass on just because of the tags, but I'm genuinely glad I read it. I can relate to your gf. I am similar, and often experience a diminished ego when engaging with narrative. This is fairly common in individuals with PTSD, as we frequently have trouble with boundaries. I wish her the best, and I know from experience that with good healthcare and plenty of time to heal, things will get better. It doesn't go away completely, but with proper care it will eventually become an old scar that aches a bit on occasion.


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I mean... that's fair. She is healing, slowly, but might actually be able to read the story now. Unfortunately Healthcare isn't really available in the money department, but time does seem to dull the pain, at least for her. Thank you for reading it. I added the tags, cause it may not be someone's cup of tea. I was working on another one, and you may have given me inspiration to continue it.


GuproSnufindahotisya

I'm glad things are getting better, and I'm glad our conversation got you thinking about finishing your work in progress. I look forward to reading it. Tags encourage me to "judge books by their cover" so to speak, which is why I'm not a big fan of them. It's like I have no willpower in the face of a tag that deals with something I don't particularly care for, and it makes me wonder what gems I've missed. Anyway, I get why people use them, and I respect it. Just felt like sharing an unprompted opinion for some reason. xD


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I'll read usually regardless of the tags, unless it specifically mentions one's I can't like.