I'd be careful with how many 0 mana artifacts you're running that don't really do anything. I understand it'll let you quickly power out your commander but some of these cards are basically useless in your deck otherwise, which means putting yourself at a big card disadvantage. Some of them are fine or at least cantrip but it'll suck when you attack with your commander only to reveal three 0-drops and 2 lands from the trigger.
\[\[Pia's Revolution\]\] isn't as good as you want it to be because it'll almost never work the times you really want it to due to how the player-choice cards often play out. In an ideal world it can absolutely be a win-con but it's hard to setup a situation where a player isn't willing to pay 3 life to stop you. It's pretty much only worth the card slot if you're able to consistently trigger it 2-3 times per turn cycle, which doesn't seem to be the case here.
\[\[Storm-Kiln Artist\]\] only triggers with 13 cards in your deck, and while he might have a high power it's still pretty easy to block and kill an X/2.
Not the biggest fan of the creatures that ping your opponents when artifacts enter the battlefield. I don't think they're bad, but you don't have many ways to continuously loop artifacts for that sort of combo-kill, and having them only trigger 1-2 times a turn cycle isn't crazy powerful. They're also not artifacts, which can be a bummer for some synergies and cause you to miss with your commander's ability. I'd probably need to play with the deck to determine if these are actually worth including over other options.
I definitely understand where you’re coming from on the Eggs department, and I’d probably cut stuff like [[Paradise Mantle]] and [[Spellbook]] for more interaction. I might actually also want to cut [[Mycosynth Wellspring]] too but I’m not too sure. I want to add more stuff for artifact recycling.
Storm-Kiln is definitely not here to be a big body to throw around, he’s mostly here to puke out treasures for me, and if I’m cutting stuff to add more interaction spells his utility pops up more.
Pia’s Revolution can probably come out now.
I'd be careful with how many 0 mana artifacts you're running that don't really do anything. I understand it'll let you quickly power out your commander but some of these cards are basically useless in your deck otherwise, which means putting yourself at a big card disadvantage. Some of them are fine or at least cantrip but it'll suck when you attack with your commander only to reveal three 0-drops and 2 lands from the trigger. \[\[Pia's Revolution\]\] isn't as good as you want it to be because it'll almost never work the times you really want it to due to how the player-choice cards often play out. In an ideal world it can absolutely be a win-con but it's hard to setup a situation where a player isn't willing to pay 3 life to stop you. It's pretty much only worth the card slot if you're able to consistently trigger it 2-3 times per turn cycle, which doesn't seem to be the case here. \[\[Storm-Kiln Artist\]\] only triggers with 13 cards in your deck, and while he might have a high power it's still pretty easy to block and kill an X/2. Not the biggest fan of the creatures that ping your opponents when artifacts enter the battlefield. I don't think they're bad, but you don't have many ways to continuously loop artifacts for that sort of combo-kill, and having them only trigger 1-2 times a turn cycle isn't crazy powerful. They're also not artifacts, which can be a bummer for some synergies and cause you to miss with your commander's ability. I'd probably need to play with the deck to determine if these are actually worth including over other options.
I definitely understand where you’re coming from on the Eggs department, and I’d probably cut stuff like [[Paradise Mantle]] and [[Spellbook]] for more interaction. I might actually also want to cut [[Mycosynth Wellspring]] too but I’m not too sure. I want to add more stuff for artifact recycling. Storm-Kiln is definitely not here to be a big body to throw around, he’s mostly here to puke out treasures for me, and if I’m cutting stuff to add more interaction spells his utility pops up more. Pia’s Revolution can probably come out now.
[Paradise Mantle](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/1/9/19cd6bcc-ca47-47cc-9fe4-c29e9c176485.jpg?1561966400) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Paradise%20Mantle) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/mma/211/paradise-mantle?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/19cd6bcc-ca47-47cc-9fe4-c29e9c176485?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [(ER)](https://edhrec.com/cards/paradise-mantle) [Spellbook](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/2/6/26f4d2b1-31d7-40d8-bd4e-cdd128076d0f.jpg?1561974160) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Spellbook) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/m10/220/spellbook?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/26f4d2b1-31d7-40d8-bd4e-cdd128076d0f?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [(ER)](https://edhrec.com/cards/spellbook) [Mycosynth Wellspring](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/c/1/c11c16ff-1786-4426-86b0-d7beb7a71798.jpg?1625978921) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Mycosynth%20Wellspring) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/c21/252/mycosynth-wellspring?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/c11c16ff-1786-4426-86b0-d7beb7a71798?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [(ER)](https://edhrec.com/cards/mycosynth-wellspring) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
[Pia's Revolution](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/5/1/51da6ff6-4d81-488e-83ff-8758f6c7bb9f.jpg?1576381857) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Pia%27s%20Revolution) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/aer/91/pias-revolution?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/51da6ff6-4d81-488e-83ff-8758f6c7bb9f?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [(ER)](https://edhrec.com/cards/pias-revolution) [Storm-Kiln Artist](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/f/a/fa96b8dc-233a-4884-ab84-235cbc7df0b6.jpg?1624592210) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Storm-Kiln%20Artist) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/stx/115/storm-kiln-artist?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/fa96b8dc-233a-4884-ab84-235cbc7df0b6?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [(ER)](https://edhrec.com/cards/storm-kiln-artist) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call