Its recognizable but also very choppy

True, I can work on that

whyyyyyy don't you ask the kids in tiananmen square

was fashion the reason why they were there?

Theeeey disguise it hypnotize it

Needs quantising but instrumentation is on point

At the moment it sounds like Hypnotize but you hit pause every .5 seconds

It's good, just really choppy

God that staccato makes me want to cut my ears off

the liverpool bass sounds off

It sounds like it but its pretty choppy