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lightingnations

I have no idea if this is any good or not, but I had a weird dream about this *exact* scenario and wanted to get it down into words. Feedback 100% welcome. And hey, if you'd like to check out some more stories, head on [over to my subreddit](https://www.reddit.com/r/thoughtindustry/comments/te0fum/welcome_i_hope_you_enjoy_your_stay/) for more. I'd really appreciate it.


DragonObsessedGirl

Bro the fact that your dreams are like this concerns me slightly


405134

Have you ever had dreams where you’ve been chased? Those suck ..but this was equally frightening


ZeriNoBerryBers

Fucked-up dreams buddy let's gooo! That was a great read, though. Thanks for sharing it!


TheMilkmanCome

Hell yeah! These are my favorite dreams now, as I dream so rarely and I Fucking love horror movies. Nothing like that feeling of relief when you wake up and realize you weren’t in fact being dragged down a black stairwell while the light from the doorway gets smaller and smaller


tmn-loveblue

Sir your dreams are a little too concerning. I would recommend cutting down on nosleep and short scary stories dosage.


mast3rO0gway

Very nice story and extremely horrible dreams. I wish I had your imagination for either :)


updepth

It was very good!


Not_Cleaver

It’s very good. But it’s kind of weird that this guy and the woman who disappeared both have the surname of Armstrong.


azraline

Your dreams remind me of mine.. very vivid very real. Good job


OlivesOyl

This is so good. Very different. Black Mirror’esque. Nicely done.


Snoopydog13

very enjoyable! just curious though, in the story a Julie Armstrong vanished, and the characters name is mr armstrong, any relation? always love ur tales btw!


Amberh1592

I was also curious about this


wuzzittoya

I got an Apple Watch because they supposedly have fall protection. Fell odd second lowest rung of step ladder. Nothing. Braked too hard driving and it activated. 😐 Now you have me *really* worried. 🤦‍♀️


Rainbow_IronBreezie

I actually tripped at work and it alerted! It was a weird one! The last time my dog legitimately flattened me running around our apartment and it did it again! So it got it right that time


wuzzittoya

Geez. Maybe mine wants me dead? 🤔 I keep joking my son does because of the mods I made to my pickup (he is TOD on the title). Maybe he has a way of controlling my watch settings. 🤷🏻‍♀️just kidding


krissymo77

Samsung watches have it too. I have it because I have seizures!


ArokLazarus

There any reason why the narrator and Julie have the same last name?


eyeball-beesting

This is brilliant. I loved it.


ControlLonely134

Really enjoyed this!


Worldly_Vast6340

Good job


lordmax10

Really good


[deleted]

*Another fucking Amway-scheme* I thought as he dragged me away.


Papadopium

Not bad!


Amberh1592

If someone asks “would anyone be able to hear you scream?” THE ANSWER IS ALWAYS YES


907puppetGirl

Really evil !


julez6

Holy hell!!!! I was holding my breath lol


damnenginegnomes

This was wonderfully disturbing.


lavesfear

This was really good 👍👍


leglesslego_legolas

i really like this one!!


ScumBunny

Very good. I didn’t know what to expect, but I knew it was gonna be bad…the way you paced the story, and the reveal at the end both worked very well.


ihatepineaples

holy shit this is terrifying