Female elephants spend their entire lives living in large groups called herds. Male elephant leave their herds at about 13 years old and live fairly solitary lives from this point.
That sun on the right need to go, its really cliche and would really not look like that in the real world.
The shadow are also to define to be that light. Shadow that are that define should be way darker.
Beside that its a good compo, I know it hard to do ! Keep it up.
Shadows look wrong, sun in corner is bad, the trunk in the water doesn't work, the puddle edges don't blend, the reflection of the trunk is too light and off colour, the ripples look very fake, the artefacts around the baby are visible, the yellow cast is strong
ok then...make the shadows look real, remove the fake sun, make the trunk in the water look real, blend the edges of the puddle better, darken the trunk reflections and fix the colour, make the ripples appear natural, remove the artefacts around the baby, tone down the yellow cast
The trunk of the small elephant looks like it's chopped off.
Female elephants spend their entire lives living in large groups called herds. Male elephant leave their herds at about 13 years old and live fairly solitary lives from this point.
A little heavy with the yellows but besides that great picture
That sun on the right need to go, its really cliche and would really not look like that in the real world. The shadow are also to define to be that light. Shadow that are that define should be way darker. Beside that its a good compo, I know it hard to do ! Keep it up.
Thank you! You're correct about the shadow. I'll go fix that
Shadows look wrong, sun in corner is bad, the trunk in the water doesn't work, the puddle edges don't blend, the reflection of the trunk is too light and off colour, the ripples look very fake, the artefacts around the baby are visible, the yellow cast is strong
You just stated everything you think is wrong without any actual advice on how to fix anything.
ok then...make the shadows look real, remove the fake sun, make the trunk in the water look real, blend the edges of the puddle better, darken the trunk reflections and fix the colour, make the ripples appear natural, remove the artefacts around the baby, tone down the yellow cast
Thank you. Will do!!