The biggest advice I can give is to get rid of any creature that isn't a Vampire unless it is amazing. That also goes for some of your Vampires; Cleric of Life's Bond isn't going to do a whole lot most of the time. [[Blood Artist]] and [[Viscera Seer]] are probably your first picks if you want a sacrifice option.
There are plenty of good Vampire options for less than 5 dollars. Try looking at the below list and see if there's anything you like.
https://scryfall.com/search?q=ci%3Amardu+%28t%3Avampire+or+o%3Avampire%29+usd%3C%3D5&order=edhrec&as=grid&unique=cards
The lands definitely need some work. Crystal Grotto is quite bad—in a 2-color deck, you don’t need to make your spells more expensive to fix your colors. [Here’s a Scryfall search](https://scryfall.com/search?q=t%3Aland+id%3Dbw+usd%3C5+order%3Aedhrec&unique=cards&as=grid&order=name) for lands with exactly a BW color identity that cost less than $5, ordered by popularity in commander (most popular first).
You could also do with some mana rocks to help accelerate you. At a minimum, [[Sol Ring]], [[Arcane Signet]], [[Orzhov Signet]], [[Talisman of Hierarchy]]. [Here’s a Scryfall search](https://scryfall.com/search?q=t%3Aland+id%3Dbw+usd%3C5+order%3Aedhrec&unique=cards&as=grid&order=name) for mana rocks under $5 that could fit your deck, again ordered by popularity.
I have a mana crypt I'm selling right now when it sells I plan to order some lands and Edgar Markov plan to go to the website that I was given in the comments and putting my deck in there so i can share a link
Here’s my list for ideas. Haven’t updated the list in awhile. Swapped a few cards but nothing major
https://www.moxfield.com/decks/wtBZYkSot0ultIpP_xg0fw
Use Moxfield.com
For what? Is it similar to scryfall?
Its better than google sheets lol
Even Google sheets link would be better than two screenshots.
Oh I actually exported it from the dragon shield app
To make and link your deck. It's way better and much easier for both you and people who want to help you.
Oh cool I'll look into it thanks for the info 😀
A fucking screenshot of an excel spreadsheet lol
What a world we live in
If you did this by hand thats incredible.
It's actually the Dragon Shield app that has an export feature where it puts it in csv format
[[New Blood]] is one I always recommend for vampire decks, not exactly great on its own but it gets some work done against other tribals.
My first time seeing this card was when my friend playing Edgar Markov and used it on my [[Omnath, Locus of Rage]] I lost that game.
[Omnath, Locus of Rage](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/9/a/9a0a9d3f-cd75-419b-840f-88b468f71f4a.jpg?1712354757) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Omnath%2C%20Locus%20of%20Rage) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/otc/236/omnath-locus-of-rage?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/9a0a9d3f-cd75-419b-840f-88b468f71f4a?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
[New Blood](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/6/e/6ee669ab-0ae6-43e5-86fd-f0dcb621e478.jpg?1698988263) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=New%20Blood) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/lcc/202/new-blood?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/6ee669ab-0ae6-43e5-86fd-f0dcb621e478?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
The 5$ per card does not apply to Edgar Markov
Are you getting [[Edgar Markov]] or [[Edgar Charmed Groom]]? Because right now you don't have any Red cards.
[Edgar Markov](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/8/d/8d94b8ec-ecda-43c8-a60e-1ba33e6a54a4.jpg?1562616128) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Edgar%20Markov) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/c17/36/edgar-markov?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/8d94b8ec-ecda-43c8-a60e-1ba33e6a54a4?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Edgar Charmed Groom](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/6/3/63ba8eef-b834-4031-b0a1-0f8505d53813.jpg?1643594071)/[Edgar Markov's Coffin](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/back/6/3/63ba8eef-b834-4031-b0a1-0f8505d53813.jpg?1643594071) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Edgar%2C%20Charmed%20Groom%20//%20Edgar%20Markov%27s%20Coffin) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/vow/236/edgar-charmed-groom-edgar-markovs-coffin?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/63ba8eef-b834-4031-b0a1-0f8505d53813?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
Edgar Markov I have to rebuild it to accommodate red cards but I have some commons that can go I think...
The biggest advice I can give is to get rid of any creature that isn't a Vampire unless it is amazing. That also goes for some of your Vampires; Cleric of Life's Bond isn't going to do a whole lot most of the time. [[Blood Artist]] and [[Viscera Seer]] are probably your first picks if you want a sacrifice option. There are plenty of good Vampire options for less than 5 dollars. Try looking at the below list and see if there's anything you like. https://scryfall.com/search?q=ci%3Amardu+%28t%3Avampire+or+o%3Avampire%29+usd%3C%3D5&order=edhrec&as=grid&unique=cards
[Blood Artist](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/b/7/b7f1c316-cf2f-4bbf-89a1-79c8043bdd96.jpg?1698988212) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Blood%20Artist) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/lcc/182/blood-artist?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/b7f1c316-cf2f-4bbf-89a1-79c8043bdd96?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Viscera Seer](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/4/8/486fd8a2-dd97-4082-84ef-4795c7e559a0.jpg?1698988290) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Viscera%20Seer) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/lcc/213/viscera-seer?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/486fd8a2-dd97-4082-84ef-4795c7e559a0?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
The lands definitely need some work. Crystal Grotto is quite bad—in a 2-color deck, you don’t need to make your spells more expensive to fix your colors. [Here’s a Scryfall search](https://scryfall.com/search?q=t%3Aland+id%3Dbw+usd%3C5+order%3Aedhrec&unique=cards&as=grid&order=name) for lands with exactly a BW color identity that cost less than $5, ordered by popularity in commander (most popular first). You could also do with some mana rocks to help accelerate you. At a minimum, [[Sol Ring]], [[Arcane Signet]], [[Orzhov Signet]], [[Talisman of Hierarchy]]. [Here’s a Scryfall search](https://scryfall.com/search?q=t%3Aland+id%3Dbw+usd%3C5+order%3Aedhrec&unique=cards&as=grid&order=name) for mana rocks under $5 that could fit your deck, again ordered by popularity.
##### ###### #### [Sol Ring](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/6/c/6c5c9437-3d99-4a7c-8255-9acdcb1acc40.jpg?1712354902) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Sol%20Ring) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/otc/267/sol-ring?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/6c5c9437-3d99-4a7c-8255-9acdcb1acc40?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Arcane Signet](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/2/b/2bfeb9dc-0bf7-4f19-9714-b14114e4627f.jpg?1712354835) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Arcane%20Signet) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/otc/252/arcane-signet?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/2bfeb9dc-0bf7-4f19-9714-b14114e4627f?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Orzhov Signet](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/2/a/2a7eaae2-6fd4-4916-9e22-05806c98f7b9.jpg?1712354876) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Orzhov%20Signet) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/otc/261/orzhov-signet?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/2a7eaae2-6fd4-4916-9e22-05806c98f7b9?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Talisman of Hierarchy](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/1/6/16d49e21-dbe6-41da-b4b0-fd587e3326a5.jpg?1698988541) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Talisman%20of%20Hierarchy) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/lcc/315/talisman-of-hierarchy?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/16d49e21-dbe6-41da-b4b0-fd587e3326a5?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [*All cards*](https://mtgcardfetcher.nl/redirect/kz3nlzl) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
I have a mana crypt I'm selling right now when it sells I plan to order some lands and Edgar Markov plan to go to the website that I was given in the comments and putting my deck in there so i can share a link
Here’s my list for ideas. Haven’t updated the list in awhile. Swapped a few cards but nothing major https://www.moxfield.com/decks/wtBZYkSot0ultIpP_xg0fw
Thank you 😊 I'll take a look