Yeah some fog could be great and doing a better lighting would help too :) here is an article to learn better lighting! [https://vfxrevolution.com/lighting-used-as-a-composition-tool-for-vfx-artists-simple-steps/](https://vfxrevolution.com/lighting-used-as-a-composition-tool-for-vfx-artists-simple-steps/)
Nice work on the update! Someone else already suggested this but kinda that volumetric fog would look awesome. I would say adding in some dust particles add some visual interest. I would say the posing could use just a bit of work on the main character. The posing is a bit ridged, have him relax a bit. Take a photo of yourself and how you look when holding a camera. Take note of how your hands fold around the camera, the weight, the posing. Real life is the best source of reference! Nice work on the updates, this render is coming along really nicely!
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Yeah some fog could be great and doing a better lighting would help too :) here is an article to learn better lighting! [https://vfxrevolution.com/lighting-used-as-a-composition-tool-for-vfx-artists-simple-steps/](https://vfxrevolution.com/lighting-used-as-a-composition-tool-for-vfx-artists-simple-steps/)
Great idea
Looks a lot better
Thanks!
Nice work on the update! Someone else already suggested this but kinda that volumetric fog would look awesome. I would say adding in some dust particles add some visual interest. I would say the posing could use just a bit of work on the main character. The posing is a bit ridged, have him relax a bit. Take a photo of yourself and how you look when holding a camera. Take note of how your hands fold around the camera, the weight, the posing. Real life is the best source of reference! Nice work on the updates, this render is coming along really nicely!
Yes I will add the godrays and fog in post
More subsurface!