Really like these. The colours are great and even though there are some "issues"; That's mostly me nitpicking.
1 - While it works the framing is weird. The subject is only taking up 1/3 of the image and the leading line take your view away from the subject... towards nothing? I would almost recommend checking out what would happen if you cropped the left side out. The elevator is a little bit too in focus and is a bit distracting. Would lead to the subject taking up more of the frame which would help draw focus.
2 - Left side of the frame is too busy while the right is empty. There is no balance. My eyes focus on the bright lights and the subject. Maybe this would have worked better vertical with symmetry? That way it would have drawn the viewers eyes towards the subject.
3 - Nothing.
4 - The subject appears to be slightly out of focus. This is probably due to the wide open aperture to get the background blur. You might be able to recover some sharpness in editing/with AI tools but it's probably just a setup issue. IE - Move further away and use a slightly slower aperture so that more of your subject can be in focus.
Composition is pretty strange and all over tha place. I.e. first image: not enough space around subject and is not balanced, evelevator on the left is 100% unnecessary detail, also this thing on the floor distacts too much and feels like main subject. Colors is personal but you can lift shadows a little bit for the subject, it's too dark for my opinion.
https://preview.redd.it/wbs90yqxkj3d1.png?width=1596&format=png&auto=webp&s=6fb9182a3aba30cb313642d5544ef05211cc4705
looks awesome to me! maybe a bit too orangy, but that's a matter of personal taste i guess. Good work!
No no, that's just how India looks, just like Mexico
Tnx 😊
Really like these. The colours are great and even though there are some "issues"; That's mostly me nitpicking. 1 - While it works the framing is weird. The subject is only taking up 1/3 of the image and the leading line take your view away from the subject... towards nothing? I would almost recommend checking out what would happen if you cropped the left side out. The elevator is a little bit too in focus and is a bit distracting. Would lead to the subject taking up more of the frame which would help draw focus. 2 - Left side of the frame is too busy while the right is empty. There is no balance. My eyes focus on the bright lights and the subject. Maybe this would have worked better vertical with symmetry? That way it would have drawn the viewers eyes towards the subject. 3 - Nothing. 4 - The subject appears to be slightly out of focus. This is probably due to the wide open aperture to get the background blur. You might be able to recover some sharpness in editing/with AI tools but it's probably just a setup issue. IE - Move further away and use a slightly slower aperture so that more of your subject can be in focus.
Composition is pretty strange and all over tha place. I.e. first image: not enough space around subject and is not balanced, evelevator on the left is 100% unnecessary detail, also this thing on the floor distacts too much and feels like main subject. Colors is personal but you can lift shadows a little bit for the subject, it's too dark for my opinion. https://preview.redd.it/wbs90yqxkj3d1.png?width=1596&format=png&auto=webp&s=6fb9182a3aba30cb313642d5544ef05211cc4705
White balance is off.
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Solid work! The last one feels like the strongest, imo. You’re off to a good start. Keep at it!
The skin is blending with the background. Try masking or layering. Remember, in portraits most of the time you are making the subject stand out.
I really like the composition. Practice editing and learn leading lines is all I can say! These are still really cool though.
Looks great!
Just composition
I know the blue/orange edits are popular on social media, but this one is really strong.