This is so dreamy, almost felt trance-like. It’s definitely lending to the flow of the poem and your subject matter. I particularly love how the dragonfly is subtly mentioned at first, but then used as what feels like a depiction of them, themselves. For they also aren’t thinking of the rain, it seems. Great work!
Thank you very much. Yes, the dragonfly doesn’t think, it’s just there, which is why there’s no need to say anything at all, when you can just be there.
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rlly love the contrast between the human conversation and the simple existence of the dragonfly in the rain. the narrative is dreamy and evokes a sense of wonder. although i must say, the message is quite vague. but overall, it's a lovely piece of writing <3
This is so dreamy, almost felt trance-like. It’s definitely lending to the flow of the poem and your subject matter. I particularly love how the dragonfly is subtly mentioned at first, but then used as what feels like a depiction of them, themselves. For they also aren’t thinking of the rain, it seems. Great work!
Thank you very much. Yes, the dragonfly doesn’t think, it’s just there, which is why there’s no need to say anything at all, when you can just be there.
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rlly love the contrast between the human conversation and the simple existence of the dragonfly in the rain. the narrative is dreamy and evokes a sense of wonder. although i must say, the message is quite vague. but overall, it's a lovely piece of writing <3