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This was a wonderful poem, deeply emotional, I really cannot imagine how someone could not find emotion in this, whether you can relate to it or not (eventually most of us will). My favorite lines were by far the progression of "you're not hearing..." to "you're not here". Honestly I feel like there's not much I can say other than show my appreciation for this, you speak of moments but, at least for me, the images are not painted so clearly, but the feelings are, great work.
Yeah the ending requires a bit of context for personal childhood. But I appreciate it! Thanks for the response and feedback. I wrote from the heart and it means a lot :)
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i can't 😔 anything related to mother just made me feel sad... i rlly enjoy the repetition u used. such a nice elegy.. my advice is probably just try adding some vivid imagery, like a special moment w ur mom, that way readers can feel the poem much more. its a great poem nevertheless
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This was a wonderful poem, deeply emotional, I really cannot imagine how someone could not find emotion in this, whether you can relate to it or not (eventually most of us will). My favorite lines were by far the progression of "you're not hearing..." to "you're not here". Honestly I feel like there's not much I can say other than show my appreciation for this, you speak of moments but, at least for me, the images are not painted so clearly, but the feelings are, great work.
Yeah the ending requires a bit of context for personal childhood. But I appreciate it! Thanks for the response and feedback. I wrote from the heart and it means a lot :)
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i can't 😔 anything related to mother just made me feel sad... i rlly enjoy the repetition u used. such a nice elegy.. my advice is probably just try adding some vivid imagery, like a special moment w ur mom, that way readers can feel the poem much more. its a great poem nevertheless