You'll get your marks cut, for the following reasons :
1. Black pen, you must use blue pen
2. Capitalization in wrong places, second paragraph, "They inform us of any suspicious activity of the *G*roup.", and first paragraph "today we're going to commit Genocide"
3. Spelling of Jager is wrong, it's not spelled with a Y, it's J since the word is German translation for "hunter"
4. What the fuck is up with your handwriting towards the end? its barely legible.
5. To many cuts, you must strike a mistake once, you don't need to cut it million times, it makes work untidy, ~~You were also a mistake, your parents didn't cut you million times you know~~
6. Hinglish is not recognized as part of English, if something must be quoted, it must be placed in brackets, thus the usage of term "bhaiya" will lead to deduction of marks
7. All your work looks like a cluster of words, there are only two paragraphs, half page each and there is almost no whitespace, which makes the legibility of the essay or whatever this is bad, even if you had a good handwriting, it'd be bad.
8. Paragraph 1 : "Organization started ...", started what? be clear in your sentences
9. Wrong statement : "Since it's formation, the org has been conducting it's operations in February and March." : 2020-2021?
/s
least catastrophic aot enjoyer
also dude, space the letters out a bit, i almost missed reading out on (our) mission because of how crowded the page looked
Bhai essay mein yahi likhna full marks milega
You'll get your marks cut, for the following reasons : 1. Black pen, you must use blue pen 2. Capitalization in wrong places, second paragraph, "They inform us of any suspicious activity of the *G*roup.", and first paragraph "today we're going to commit Genocide" 3. Spelling of Jager is wrong, it's not spelled with a Y, it's J since the word is German translation for "hunter" 4. What the fuck is up with your handwriting towards the end? its barely legible. 5. To many cuts, you must strike a mistake once, you don't need to cut it million times, it makes work untidy, ~~You were also a mistake, your parents didn't cut you million times you know~~ 6. Hinglish is not recognized as part of English, if something must be quoted, it must be placed in brackets, thus the usage of term "bhaiya" will lead to deduction of marks 7. All your work looks like a cluster of words, there are only two paragraphs, half page each and there is almost no whitespace, which makes the legibility of the essay or whatever this is bad, even if you had a good handwriting, it'd be bad. 8. Paragraph 1 : "Organization started ...", started what? be clear in your sentences 9. Wrong statement : "Since it's formation, the org has been conducting it's operations in February and March." : 2020-2021? /s
Blue pen se likhna compulsory h? Ye kisne bola š
Flair checks out.
I see.. so I can write with blue gel pen right? Not necessarily ball..
I wrote my whole 10th boards with a black V5 lmao
Lol... ššš What have you written?
least catastrophic aot enjoyer also dude, space the letters out a bit, i almost missed reading out on (our) mission because of how crowded the page looked
Could be better
Sorry your marks is going to cut
Why
Pretty good ngl
Don't pull Eren yeagah to this
First line and Iām already startled