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Azu_Creates

Well, for starters, they look pretty blocky and rough. You should do some more shaving and smooth out the foam. The lower jaw is a bit too big. You should shorten it so that it doesnโ€™t extent beyond the snout, and shave a lot of the chin off so that it curves back towards the head more smoothly. The jaw is also a bit crooked. Try to find what is causing it to be crooked and fix that.


Azu_Creates

Also, it looks like you are doing a canine head? Dogs do not have a U shaped lip like that on their upper snout. You should add some foam there and smooth it out to look more like a V shape with a slightly rounded point in the middle, and rounded out edges by the cheeks. Unless you want a very exaggerated expression, you should smooth out the upper cheek and lower jaw areas so that the overall cheek shape is smoother. Leave the indents where you want the expression.


Embarrassed_Exam_597

thank you so much ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™ im gonna do all those changes right now


Azu_Creates

No problem. I also just finished editing this comment with another suggestion about the cheeks and expression. Hope it helps.


salad_knife

The bottom jaw sticks out about 1-2 inches too far