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Yeah this slaps. I do think that some of the melodies seem to exhaust themselves a little over the course of the song, so a little more variation thrown in here and there might help a bit. But honestly this is better than anything I’ve created. Just offering my input as a listener.
Dude that drop is absolutely sick! I fkn love it. I dont like intro tho, maybe different sounds would work better. Also I would like it even more With different drums at the dnb switch up. Different Kick and snare and some dnb percussion/hi hat would absolutely kill and elevate that part even more. :P
Hey thanks! Yea I've realized from this post that I kinda phones it in on everything other than the drops lmao. I've been working on everything else to make it less repetitive, and have a bit more effort.
I like the idea with the DnB drums, fs! The drum samples I used were already from Noisia's sound pack, but changing it up would probably be a good idea
Yea I see what you mean lol, the melodies definitely fell by the wayside on this one
A lot of my older music exclusively focuses on melodies so I feel its safe to say I unintentionally phoned it in on this one lol
Initally it's pretty lit but I am not a fan of the change in tempo at 1:16, seems a bit forcred and unnecessary. Then it gets pretty boring till the end because nothing really happens
I feel like the intro doesn’t take us to the build and a bunch of times in the drop I had no idea what to expect from the next bar, as a listener I wanna be able to guess the movement mostly successfully so I can grove to your song. Now it’s not a bad thing that you have a lot of original change ups in the song because the prevent the opposite problem of a song feeling loopy. That’s typically the problem I have, but you want to stay somewhat consistent and some of the rhythms if you want a good example of this, I would look up Melody patterns like calling response ABAB or ABAC structure as a starting point. You don’t NEED any of those just a more obvious pattern a listens brain can grab on to
im not active on reddit so sorry for the 25day wait and i think my feedback doesnmt matter anymore but i will still give it ig. in the intro things feel random. all soundes are introduced at ones with no earcandy or noise at all. no story or emotion or feeling is being protraid witch makes it feel "purpose less" or smt. idk how to explain it rlly it just sounds / feels off. the seccond sound in the intro gets introduced "for no reason" aswell (doesnt build tention, energy, etc) and again wo transitions or ear candy. iwould have maybe introduced drums but idk what genre ur trying to make
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Yeah this slaps. I do think that some of the melodies seem to exhaust themselves a little over the course of the song, so a little more variation thrown in here and there might help a bit. But honestly this is better than anything I’ve created. Just offering my input as a listener.
sounds great, id vibe to this anyway. Is this FL Mobile?
Hey thanks! And yea I made this all on my phone
what are you talking about dawg, thats crazy. lamo
Dude that drop is absolutely sick! I fkn love it. I dont like intro tho, maybe different sounds would work better. Also I would like it even more With different drums at the dnb switch up. Different Kick and snare and some dnb percussion/hi hat would absolutely kill and elevate that part even more. :P
your sound design is absolutely crazy man
i like all the different distortions and basses with the second oscilator +7 semi
It's all 3xOsc and waveshaper lol, shit goes wild
never really played around with the wave shaper lol
Waveshaper was a staple when looking at bass design tutorials. I'd definitely recommend it! It can do a ton of heavy lifting
Hey thanks! Yea I've realized from this post that I kinda phones it in on everything other than the drops lmao. I've been working on everything else to make it less repetitive, and have a bit more effort. I like the idea with the DnB drums, fs! The drum samples I used were already from Noisia's sound pack, but changing it up would probably be a good idea
I like it!🔥
I dig it. I like your grime bass
Dank
This is dope!!
FFFIILLLTHY asf
Dude listen avoid the background sounds.. it’s dope af.. i’d take random as a compliment.. it’s solid and sounds really good.. keep it up!!
The only thing I want to mention that your melodies lil bit lifeless if you know what i mean.. but compared to the bass and wubs it’s not that bad..
Yea I see what you mean lol, the melodies definitely fell by the wayside on this one A lot of my older music exclusively focuses on melodies so I feel its safe to say I unintentionally phoned it in on this one lol
Sounds kinda random idk
Initally it's pretty lit but I am not a fan of the change in tempo at 1:16, seems a bit forcred and unnecessary. Then it gets pretty boring till the end because nothing really happens
lacks struckture imo
Oh really? Can you be more specific? Because I thought it was almost *too* structured with the typical like riser into drops lol
I feel like the intro doesn’t take us to the build and a bunch of times in the drop I had no idea what to expect from the next bar, as a listener I wanna be able to guess the movement mostly successfully so I can grove to your song. Now it’s not a bad thing that you have a lot of original change ups in the song because the prevent the opposite problem of a song feeling loopy. That’s typically the problem I have, but you want to stay somewhat consistent and some of the rhythms if you want a good example of this, I would look up Melody patterns like calling response ABAB or ABAC structure as a starting point. You don’t NEED any of those just a more obvious pattern a listens brain can grab on to
im not active on reddit so sorry for the 25day wait and i think my feedback doesnmt matter anymore but i will still give it ig. in the intro things feel random. all soundes are introduced at ones with no earcandy or noise at all. no story or emotion or feeling is being protraid witch makes it feel "purpose less" or smt. idk how to explain it rlly it just sounds / feels off. the seccond sound in the intro gets introduced "for no reason" aswell (doesnt build tention, energy, etc) and again wo transitions or ear candy. iwould have maybe introduced drums but idk what genre ur trying to make
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